Now, it seems a provable point
That one who truly wishes to
Could concoct rather passable poetry
(use a rhyme generator; or two)
I wonder why it is, then
that no matter how hard I try
every attempt at meaningful verse
seems to go quite promptly awry
There was once a time, I remember
when I considered it uncommon neat
to be able to choose two words
groovy last syllables repeat!
I wrote poems on sunsets and rainbows
and on mean girls; and every time,
when I got to the end of the alternate
sentences, poof! there was the rhyme
Then came teen angst; fear of pretension
dread of hypocrisy (though, if truth be told,
teen angst; teen acne; burning desire for truth,
only came along when I was twenty years old)
See, I’d never been fond of reading poetry
Found it threw my mind into disarray
Found I paid more attention to the patterns
than on what it was attempting to say
Was truly unfortunate, that of late
I have fallen unwitting prey
To the lure of vers libre à la Whitman
Face it, free verse rather made my day
So perhaps the fact is that it’s easier to be
Either flippant, fun, structured; or earnest and free
For I find all too often, for a feeling strong enough
The attempt at rhyme robs the thought of clarity
I guess that’s what separates the masters from the rest
The ability to weave all aspects into one
And though I won’t ever go the whole hog, at least
I can say I tried both little ways, and have done
*thanks to these three people.
for inspirations and such :)
P.S. The next one promises to scan better.
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Oy! I think I've written at least two poems at the beginning of every year, talking about how I love free verse and then spent the rest of my time extolling the virtues of rhyme. Brilliant fun, this!:-)
Fun, yes, well, but is it any good?
Fun and good. I'm tempted to say: what's the difference?
But I think I know what you mean.
'Tis easier to be unstructured,
Rhyme does constrain you, true,
But would you not agree to this:
Language constrains you too?
But your poem, one thinks it's really
Quite decently done.
And many thanks are due to you
For linking to the One!
(Apologies in advance
And don't you dare complain.
For you've gone and woken up
One's rhyming bug again.)
Alas, one had hoped to be able
to stop by at the end of this day
to the very latest of posts
(you know, the one about the birthday)
And say, with flourish grand and bold -
"Look, see, O' One, what I have done
Now on the same page as all the rest
Been through the archives one by one"
But now you've forestalled my happy plan
With this delightful ditty
(But I'm pleased to have been the cause
Of return of poetry so witty)
:)
(whew)
well, bangalore baby in a sense. i'm a non resident bangalorean, i'm told. i love bangalore and bangaloreans! hehehe. pleased to meet you too! How did you stumble upon my ramblings? :)
Sellars and Yeatman , lost my lit virginity to them at the tender age of 13 and what a great big O that was!!!! ... *does a Hossanna*... My Gods of intellectual stimulation... Now tell me, where have YOU been all my life? *lit lover instant connection*...
*hopes that real-life soulmate doesnt read this, else will pound her to mincemeat!!*
And though I won’t ever go the whole hog, at least
I can say I tried both little ways, and have done...
surely u have.. :)
"what is time
it is nine"
did paul ever detail this little gem and its origins to you, i wonder?
giggles. :D
Goddess, meetcha too :) Indeed, and I dropped by through the dundee...
Ah-so, Ms. Sexy Legs
Canary, thank you much :)
Sowmya, but no! What?
While on rhymes, here's the mahabharat of them all:
http://mandolini.blogspot.com/2005/03/of-geese-and-g-strings.html
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